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Kinda Like Maple... by ~sandmanno3:iconsandmanno3:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Erotic > Open


Lust.

It tastes like
syrup on your tongue.

Like a light flashing in the back of my head
             rolling across the roof of my mouth
      Sweetly liking my lips and pulling gently.

You're like an over the counter drug
           in a plastic person wrapper.
©2009-2010 ~sandmanno3
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... being licked off of my fingers.

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~sandmanno3 Mar 3, 2009, 4:46:12 PM
*licks lips*

--
Due to Economic Crisis, The Light at the End of the Tunnel has. Been. Turned. (Off.)
:iconjentzi:
~Jentzi Mar 3, 2009, 5:01:08 PM
You -seriously- do want that bun, don´t you? :)

So very well-described, the influence of a pastry.

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If you can name three vampires stronger then Edward McSparklepire, copy/paste this to your sig.

-Count Dracula
- Lestat De Lioncourt
- Carmilla (Yes, from the anime "Vampire Hunter D")
- Any vampire in that anime.
- Count Duckula

Any other vampire!!
:iconsandmanno3:
~sandmanno3 Mar 3, 2009, 5:03:23 PM
This had nothing to do with any pastry, haha

--
Due to Economic Crisis, The Light at the End of the Tunnel has. Been. Turned. (Off.)
:iconjentzi:
~Jentzi Mar 3, 2009, 5:06:11 PM
Ah.. I thought about that after posting the comment, but decided that it did in my head. I think it´s because I read both poems right after one another. It would be interesting though.. a pastry so seductive in taste that the one eating it starts seeing it as a mistress or something.. Hmm..
Maybe I should write about it.

--
If you can name three vampires stronger then Edward McSparklepire, copy/paste this to your sig.

-Count Dracula
- Lestat De Lioncourt
- Carmilla (Yes, from the anime "Vampire Hunter D")
- Any vampire in that anime.
- Count Duckula

Any other vampire!!
:iconsandmanno3:
~sandmanno3 Mar 3, 2009, 5:12:07 PM
Do it. I would love to read it, haha

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Due to Economic Crisis, The Light at the End of the Tunnel has. Been. Turned. (Off.)
:iconseamistbreeze:
~SeamistBreeze Mar 5, 2009, 6:10:32 PM
Your syrup image is perfect...
Nice work.
:iconsandmanno3:
~sandmanno3 Mar 7, 2009, 9:47:39 AM
haha, thank you. After reading your... provocative piece, thats alot coming from you XD

--
Due to Economic Crisis, The Light at the End of the Tunnel has. Been. Turned. (Off.)
:iconseamistbreeze:
~SeamistBreeze Mar 11, 2009, 6:45:22 PM
Still, very succinct.

I need to work on brevity.
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