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Broken Lighter -Fire- by ~sandmanno3:iconsandmanno3:



The lighter was broken
the safety lock twisted and lost
it bounced back and forth
from one palm to the other,
              sparks
and a light in a house blew out, a miracle extinguished
and set a-beautiful-blaze
it clamped shut, but the lion still roamed free
the carpet curling in the heat,
the walls melting and vomiting on themselves
and the screams of pedestrians unheard by the bedposts
            sparks
and All Fell Down
with these sparks thunder flees
and the clouds crowd in innocent awe
raise a broken lighter to heaven
and it becomes a torch to olympus
©2008 ~sandmanno3
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for ~cypriphobia's june challenge, "fire"
still more to type up...well, actually, find is more of the word

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*pardonM3:iconpardonM3: Jun 16, 2008, 6:27:43 PM
the walls melting and vomiting on themselves

Now that's strong imagery.
~sandmanno3:iconsandmanno3: Jun 16, 2008, 6:30:05 PM
lol, thanks XDDDD
kinda creepy though, like a wannabe horror script

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I am James's sense of Sundays... and of never being to boston in the Fall
*pardonM3:iconpardonM3: Jun 16, 2008, 6:41:56 PM
ha, well I'd like to see that movie.
~xShadowedDarknessx:iconxShadowedDarknessx: Jun 16, 2008, 6:47:08 PM
:heart:

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"friends of the devil but twice as mean"- Cry-Baby
~sandmanno3:iconsandmanno3: Jun 16, 2008, 6:56:57 PM
:hug: :XD:

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I am James's sense of Sundays... and of never being to boston in the Fall
~xShadowedDarknessx:iconxShadowedDarknessx: Jun 16, 2008, 7:03:39 PM Mood: Aroused
i wants to have your poem's babies....

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"friends of the devil but twice as mean"- Cry-Baby
~sandmanno3:iconsandmanno3: Jun 16, 2008, 7:10:22 PM
im so glad my poems have no sex, otherwise id have to call you a pedophile...it less than 2 hours old XDDD
and thank you ^^ you're friggin awesome, you make me happy inside :hug:

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I am James's sense of Sundays... and of never being to boston in the Fall
~xShadowedDarknessx:iconxShadowedDarknessx: Jun 16, 2008, 7:19:43 PM Mood: Lust
what can i say, im a pedo for your poems :lick:
and you makes ME happy on teh inside, so there :]

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"friends of the devil but twice as mean"- Cry-Baby