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Articles of Temporary Fedoras. by ~sandmanno3:iconsandmanno3:



We're Dreaming blindly
and the roof is coming in
We're straight, we're tempered
      and the carpet smells like Gin
Alabaster honey, white like your teeth -
   in this tin - comence, come last
and the ceiling taste like Sin.

        We're scared
we're hot
                   we're calm
we're soft
       we're baking in this oven, Lily
   and its becoming all for naught

your lips are icy cold
your soul is a draft coming in.
   You won't remember this in the morning
lady, Its just a moment i'll be safe.
                                     within.
Your reaching out, but you'll never touch the sky
I wander off, elevator click
         with a groan and a sigh.

Up a story, on a tale
We drink to life, sip from the grail
Its half a day, gone away away
We celebrate our map making as our
ship goes astray.

Look through the window
Refocus.
                   Shinning lights have never looked so Dim.
    We're right on track, just hold the sail.

Your lips were on me.
Remember.
                   Sinking heights and the ground is caving in.
          Break off the mast, we ride to hell.

We're getting
gone
              
We're charging
off

The beds are getting tangled
and this book has lost its plot.
I realized that I loved her, muses
she was back home, asleep

and then the thought was gone.
    In a closet, counting sheep.
©2009-2010 ~sandmanno3
:iconsandmanno3:

Author's Comments

Recent Events. Made up a shitty song, with a rhythm I guess only I can Keep.

Heavy Criticism wanted.

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:iconachuzu:
I'm not going to give you heavy criticism, because your writing is not just some "shitty song". I liked it. You did well. :+fav:
:iconsandmanno3:
I just Cried reading your newest article. I sent it to about eight people.

Thank you, that's alot coming from you, hahah

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Due to Economic Crisis, The Light at the End of the Tunnel has. Been. Turned. (Off.)
:iconachuzu:
Glad you liked the article :nod:

You really are a great writer. Please don't call your stuff shity... ever... lol
:iconsandmanno3:
Thank you :heart:

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Due to Economic Crisis, The Light at the End of the Tunnel has. Been. Turned. (Off.)
:iconlil-vamp-princess:
Is it supposed to say 'this' twice in the first strophe? Other than that, I really really like it!

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But long it could not be till that her garments, heavy with their drink, pull'd the poor wretch from her melodious lay to muddy death.
:iconsandmanno3:
Thank you, haha. I didn't pick that up :heart:

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Due to Economic Crisis, The Light at the End of the Tunnel has. Been. Turned. (Off.)
:iconsandmanno3:
Thanks, now FIX IT.

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Due to Economic Crisis, The Light at the End of the Tunnel has. Been. Turned. (Off.)

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